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Still There... by ~NightReign:iconNightReign:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Spoken Word


This darkness is mine to keep.
Only my own for the taking...

Just go to sleep-- go to sleep

Felt that strong hand cover my mouth
muffle my yells, press down...

Just scream out loud-- scream out loud.

Surging pain, streaking through my body.
Mind soaking itself in horror...

Just keep breathing-- keep breathing.

It will be over soon,
tonight the tragedy will stop.

Just wake up-- wake up again.

I promise that today
it is over with, even if just for now...

Just keep fighting-- keep fighting..


(but maybe I don't want to anymore...)
©2006-2009 ~NightReign
:iconnightreign:

Author's Comments

-flashbacks are hell on the heart and mind...

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!PurpleHayzed Oct 4, 2006, 5:29:26 PM
....oh... my... gosh. I really don't know what to say about this. It's god damn good! your words are simple, yet, they make such a complete image in my head. Well not simple, dramatic i should say. really love this poem!
:iconnnshi:
~nnshi Oct 4, 2006, 5:53:38 PM
o_o...evil...black blobs <_<' *cough* they're scary >_<

--
Hug me love
and never let me down,
I need your arms
around my body
to feel you close to me
and feel your heartbeat
next to mine...
(¯`v´¯.)
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨* ¸.·*¨*.,
(¸.·´ (¸.·´ .·¸¸.·¨¯`·..~*
:iconnnshi:
~nnshi Oct 4, 2006, 5:54:39 PM
<_< never had flashbacks that much

--
Hug me love
and never let me down,
I need your arms
around my body
to feel you close to me
and feel your heartbeat
next to mine...
(¯`v´¯.)
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨* ¸.·*¨*.,
(¸.·´ (¸.·´ .·¸¸.·¨¯`·..~*
:iconnightreign:
~NightReign Oct 4, 2006, 6:14:51 PM
Thank you. I appreciate that a lot.

--
:blackrose:
..and here's all my final sins repressed...

(feel good for all the wrong reasons)
:iconnightreign:
~NightReign Oct 4, 2006, 6:15:45 PM
Not the shadows...

I like the shadows, they are better than the flashbacks...

o_-;;

--
:blackrose:
..and here's all my final sins repressed...

(feel good for all the wrong reasons)
:iconnnshi:
~nnshi Oct 5, 2006, 5:06:07 AM
o_o >_> my flashbacks...are...moosh...ish...*cough* o_o...i like flashbacks better

--
Hug me love
and never let me down,
I need your arms
around my body
to feel you close to me
and feel your heartbeat
next to mine...
(¯`v´¯.)
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨* ¸.·*¨*.,
(¸.·´ (¸.·´ .·¸¸.·¨¯`·..~*
:iconragingmalice:
~RagingMalice Oct 5, 2006, 2:34:49 PM
I get flashbacks when I'm most vulnerable. This is very good, I really like the transition of thoughts. You did a good job on this.

--
Don't fear the darkness, embrace it, and revere evil with the greatest of minds.

*Support Literature at dA!*
:iconnightreign:
~NightReign Oct 5, 2006, 5:48:37 PM
Heh, at least I'm not the only one with flashbacks. ^^;
and thank you, I'm glad you like it. :)

--
:blackrose:
..and here's all my final sins repressed...

(feel good for all the wrong reasons)
:iconnightreign:
~NightReign Oct 5, 2006, 5:49:52 PM
Heh, yeah, your flashbacks involve happiness, right?
Mine involve something more along the lines of pain and a sense of worthlessness...

Therefore we are different. *nods*

--
:blackrose:
..and here's all my final sins repressed...

(feel good for all the wrong reasons)
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